Bestir thy heart With journeys afar And rivers of stars Bestow thy love On all that ye touch On all that ye may Hence, let it be told That rhyme will be reason Paint your world With shades that will uplift you And break, break from the mold Shake off the illusions Never again lost in dismay All that you need is within you
Oooh this is beautiful!
ReplyDeleteA thought not unpleasant to think about
ReplyDeletewow!
ReplyDeletegorgeous tanka!
very good one
ReplyDeletejohn
Yes, beautiful!:)
ReplyDeleteAbsolutely beautiful!
ReplyDeleteSo very lovely!
ReplyDeleteLove it!
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ReplyDeletehi magiceye,
ReplyDeletethat's incredible...makes me want to fly high to the skies...
c yah!:|
like that bird there in the photo
ReplyDeleteyou should become a tanka writer!
ReplyDeleteBestir thy heart
ReplyDeleteWith journeys afar
And rivers of stars
Bestow thy love
On all that ye touch
On all that ye may
Hence, let it be told
That rhyme will be reason
Paint your world
With shades that will uplift you
And break, break from the mold
Shake off the illusions
Never again lost in dismay
All that you need is within you
Thy Heart
janice....thank you so much
ReplyDeleteashi...thank you for stopping by
polona.... thank you so much
john... thank you
borut...thank you :)
sai... thank you so much
margie...glad you liked it
shnaggy....glad it elated you!
andrew....thank you so much
angel...thank you for stopping by...hope to see you often
lovely!!
ReplyDeletekind of like scribbles on the pages of a book ... :)
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