Photings are jottings on photos!
You have really good flare with photos...then you words blows music to my ears
very nice.:)perhaps you might consider one thing: you have sunrise and dawn in one haiku, which basically mean the same... and haiku is too short a poem to repeat images unless you want to achieve a specific effect
Well, I like the various images this one conjures in my mind...!
Lovely!Margie
nasra....thank youpolona....shall remember...thank youborut....glad you liked itmargie...thank you
nice metaphor, magiceye!and polona, i'm learning from u too. :)
You have really good flare with photos...then you words blows music to my ears
ReplyDeletevery nice.:)
ReplyDeleteperhaps you might consider one thing: you have sunrise and dawn in one haiku, which basically mean the same... and haiku is too short a poem to repeat images unless you want to achieve a specific effect
Well, I like the various images this one conjures in my mind...!
ReplyDeleteLovely!
ReplyDeleteMargie
nasra....thank you
ReplyDeletepolona....shall remember...thank you
borut....glad you liked it
margie...thank you
nice metaphor, magiceye!
ReplyDeleteand polona, i'm learning from u too. :)