Photings are jottings on photos!
You have really good flare with photos...then you words blows music to my ears
very nice.:)perhaps you might consider one thing: you have sunrise and dawn in one haiku, which basically mean the same... and haiku is too short a poem to repeat images unless you want to achieve a specific effect
Well, I like the various images this one conjures in my mind...!
nasra....thank youpolona....shall remember...thank youborut....glad you liked itmargie...thank you
nice metaphor, magiceye!and polona, i'm learning from u too. :)